November 27 Critiques

Colin	Look and act more like a child Colin sit and play more childlike Have fun.  Match cooper Be animated React to Eli Look engaged in conversation.
Eli	You have to be very passionate, angry, and loud at the beginning – louder than the navy React to Kadyn Scene 3 – more touchy.  Louder on singing. Eli, you should be tipsy so act tipsy then “try” to not be Eli be more loving towards Kadyn she’s your wife and you two have kids and you are about to throw yourself into harm’s way where nothing is certain except bullets and bombs Diction
Kate	Be still Kate accent and relive it there is shrapnel flying towards you drowning out all sound relive it screaming
Women	When Reagan says she loves a man in uniform a soldier should walk by going to meet his friends right before and other girls should drink while she says that Giggle more in bar.
Everyone	Stay in character Louder Diction Don’t lose accents People watching scenes – react to what is happening. Work on Australian accents If someone is blocking you, move. Watch levels, planes, etc.  be different. Crazier on moving scene. Learn lines Be frozen when frozen Know cues Bigger expressions Deliver lines louder Hit consonants Smoother transitions Whoever says shut up, Sheila – work on that. Be more serious Be more familiar with the script. Watch levels Do not wear hats or caps on stage unless we ask you to wear one. Keep going even if you mess up. Facial expression.
Payton	More excited about being married.
Brady	Louder – diction Watch your back on stage. Research photographers.  Create a character.
Briggs	More touchy feely
Eli and Kadyn	Practice being more comfortable with each other Eli and Kadyn get closer in goodbye scene be hugging and looking at eachother barely four inches apart talking to each other
Spencer	Smuts – work on characterization Watch swaying Stay frozen
Kaytlyn	More flirty Work on a sexy walk and stance.  Watch old movies.
Kaytlyn and Reese	Don’t believe your relationship.
Evan	Accent Work on flirtiness and feeling
Music	Sirens on time and LOUD Watch covering up talking
Jonathan	React to Maky talking about Spencer
Reagan	Rework monologue.  Put hashmarks where there are new thoughts or change of emotion. Come see me. Be sarcastic even when not speaking.
Evan and Cooper	Build chemistry.  Evan more touchy Cooper, react more.
Needs	Shirts Watches Six tools Bomb things Poll More rubble Stools Dress for Mira – cooper Dress for Kate – 2 ·         With the front pile of junk, it looks heavy left stage