Public Performance - must comment

Everyone	Some of you keep making the same mistakes Diction Move a little bit at the beginning or it looks like a bad freeze. React more with the letter JUdith turns around to look at others – there must be reactions from everyone to Judith Louder Tipperary – almost shouting at the end.
Music	SPEAKER MUST BE IN FRONT OF CURTAIN
PEOPLE HOLDING HEADS	CANNOT HIT CURTAIN
Judith and Joan	Sweaters during Joan and Judith scene. Need to hear breathing during this scene.
Mrs. Briggs Bus driver	BEAT before your first line. Can bus driver enter from USL or SL
Photographer/Bela	Must have flashes
Judith	Must hear passionate line Hair wrap during factory? Sob during the letter from Frank Vary emotional lines – in factory and Stop killing us
GUN SHOT	???????????????????????????????????????
Dead people	Where are the flag pieces?
Mira and Tom	Show Mira where the bottle is. Cutting second Tom and Mira scene.
Joan	I shot a man- Gutteral
Angie/Mira	MUST HAVE SOCKS OFF – Judges will kill us on this.
Tom	RAF pilot – straddle the pylon Must have pilot hat
Frank/Frakker	Diction at the beginning – Mustache?as Frakker DO NOT SHOUT AS FRAKKER  - VERY UNPROFESSIONAL AND CANNOT UNDERSTAND YOU – SWITCH IT OFF Could not understand fruit cocktail line Watch Marinda’s video about coming behind Judith
Gently	didn’t believe the first scene.
Sheila	Crash course to audience Well – disgusted Can’t hate them any more – no pause
Factory scenes	Neither one worked. People noises during – especially second scene Kaytlyn gets the – no other jobs line.
Mr. Briggs Foreman	Foreman didn’t work – seemed stiff He’s okay - louder
Viv	Make it evident that First soldier cannot dance – then show him
Tom and Mom	When Judith tries to get the doll – the No and moving Tom’s arm should be together.
Dead girl	Can I have my body back? - WEIRDER
IMPORTANT	Kids’ cards
REHEARSALS	Next week - Monday night - long rehearsal